hello this is chevelle here i enjoyed the part when you talked about the trenches did you think about putting animals i did not to improve you could post about war animals
i enjoyed your anzac day slide it is a cool slide about anzac day you brought me back to when i did my anzac day slide it was fun to do. maybe next time you can writ some stuff about what you did and if it is fun or not from olivia h
Hi Aria it is me Raewyn I am happy because you put a Anzac day slide witch is good I like the picture what you have did in the start called Anzac day and who made witch is you called from Aria and the man taking a photo in front of the New Zealand flag your Ngakaunui classmate Raewyn
Konnichiwa,Riley here i like this it is every cool i mean the trenches 30 meters apart i mean wow but something that i would like is for you to put more stuff on your blog i think it would came your blog better:) well that's all bye Aria
Kia ora it's Nikau.I liked how you done that cool animation on your post.did you think about putting the animals in the post.if you could help me do that cool animation that would be brilliant.
Hey Aria its Kaycee i really like this post you just did its Really Great did you think about The animals they used in the war!Maybe next time you could add a bit more!
Hi Aria it is me Addison I like this slide next time you could read over your slide because some of the words were small and I couldn't really read otherwise it was good blog you later.
Kia ora Aria. I am glad to see that you have posted to your blog. I am looking forward to reading more about what you have been doing. What other posts do you think you could do?
Kia ora Aria, I like how there are lots of information about ANZAC day, and what it means, I also like the acrostic poem for ANZAC day. You could add your next step after the slide too.
Kia ora Aria it is your friend Lacie here. Great job on . This have you being researching about anzac day? How long did it take you to make this next time maybe you could add puncation.
Kia ora Aria Acasia here. I liked your slide you did about ANZAC day. I really liked the way you put an acrostic poem on the slide as well. What are you thinking to do for you next blog post?
Kia ora Aria I like your slide good work on it I like your picture of a soldier and I also like your facts about anzac and I also like your Acrostic poem My favourite part of this slide was the Acrostic poem , picture of the soldier and the facts good work.
Aloha Aria! Nice work! I like these facts and they're very interesting. Next time maybe could you add a few more facts? And do more of an introduction? Because it was a little confusing. Other than that, it was amazing! From Mikayla.
Kia ora Aria, Courtney here. I would like to start my sentence saying that you have done good on this blog post. Why did you have to do this? and did you choose to do this??? That's all I have to say, blog you later.
Aloha Aria, Really great slide, I love how many facts you got down, just one thing you titled it ANZAC day, and ANZAC stands for Australia New Zealand Army Corp but you have a fact that you have not talked about Australia or New Zealand, but it was still a really interesting facts and well done. Bye and blog you later:)
Talofa lava Aria I like the work you have done about anzac day.Have you thought about doing more blog posts so that people can put even more comments on your blog and you will get more followers? anyway bye.
Kia ora Aria I am Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school I like you animated slide about Anzac my qustion is when did World war happend and end my favourite slide is slide 3 about the Anzac cookies for the solidgers from war. So thats all I need to say so Bye.
Kia Ora Aria, it's Kirsty here. I really like your blog post, especially the bit about why we eat anzac biscuits. For you next blog post you should do something about anzac day like make a poppy. Did you like researching the informations? Bye!
Hey Aria its your best friend's sister here. you know trisanah's big sister Alizae by the way I love your blog post. by the way can you please do some more information and please can you do some more blog posts please but that blog post was really good nice job Aria Kai Pa.
Wow Aria I love how you explained how to celebrate matariki especially when you told us that Their popularity has led to some to suggest that Matariki should replace the Queen’s birthday as a national holiday
This ANZAC slide is really AMAZING and pretty popular because it has 40 comments! I love the bit about poppys! Next time you could add a bit more images!
Hey I'm doing your 43rd comment Aria! This is super interesting like you! I think you can really tell people interesting things. Your bit about The biscuits it made me hungry and its cool that its for Australia and New Zealand!
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hello this is chevelle here i enjoyed the part when you talked about the trenches did you think about putting animals i did not to improve you could post about war animals
ReplyDeletekia ora,I'm bea from gilberthorpe school Aria and i'm real proud of you so be good to miss. helen ok bye bye
ReplyDeletekia ora Aria love love youre Anzac day slide
ReplyDeleteyou blowed my socks off when i read all of it maybe next time add more backrounds into it
hi aria i really like the slide of anzac day that you made and it was really good and i like it so much and good bye
ReplyDeletehi its cody nice gob nice facks pucky pucky bye
ReplyDeletehi its cody I ment job bye
ReplyDeletehi its brodie.I like the way you learning about Anzac did you think about the words or did you just but them on there why did you learn about anzac
ReplyDeletei enjoyed your anzac day slide it is a cool slide about anzac day
ReplyDeleteyou brought me back to when i did my anzac day slide it was fun to do.
maybe next time you can writ some stuff about what you did and if it is fun or not from olivia h
Hi It's Hakeem And Why Do You Only Have One Post. Eney Waes I LOVE ANZAC DAY. Eney Waes BYE BYE.
ReplyDeletehi aria i like your anzac day you made your anzac day is really good bye
ReplyDeleteHi Aria it is me Raewyn I am happy because you put a Anzac day slide witch is good I like the picture what you have did in the start called Anzac day and who made witch is you called from Aria and the man taking a photo in front of the New Zealand flag your Ngakaunui classmate Raewyn
ReplyDeletehey it's benaiah
ReplyDeletei liked your slide about anzac day
you bruhter me back to when we did it
why did you do this post
good bye
Konnichiwa,Riley here i like this it is every cool i mean the trenches 30 meters apart i mean wow but something that i would like is for you to put more stuff on your blog i think it would came your blog better:) well that's all bye Aria
ReplyDeleteKia ora it's Nikau.I liked how you done that cool animation on your post.did you think about putting the animals in the post.if you could help me do that cool animation that would be brilliant.
ReplyDeleteI like anzac day because if you watch it on youtube thes lot,s of funy vids from Thomas
ReplyDeletemaybe 10000000 humans were lost?
ReplyDeleteHey Aria its Kaycee i really like this post you just did its Really Great did you think about The animals they used in the war!Maybe next time you could add a bit more!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aria. Isabella here
ReplyDeleteI really like it but I see 5th slide you copy and pasted it but still very good Anyways blog ya later.
kia ora its Jonte i like the way you took a photo of a army person by
ReplyDeleteHi Aria it is me Addison I like this slide next time you could read over your slide because some of the words were small and I couldn't really read otherwise it was good blog you later.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aria.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see that you have posted to your blog. I am looking forward to reading more about what you have been doing.
What other posts do you think you could do?
Kia Ora Aria.
ReplyDeleteI like how you did some long facts about Anzac day day. I am looking forward to your next blog post to see what you have been doing.
Blog you later
Kia ora Aria,
ReplyDeleteI like how there are lots of information about ANZAC day, and what it means, I also like the acrostic poem for ANZAC day. You could add your next step after the slide too.
Kia ora Aria it is your friend Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on .
This have you being researching about anzac day?
How long did it take you to make this
next time maybe you could add puncation.
Kia ora Aria Acasia here.
ReplyDeleteI liked your slide you did about ANZAC day. I really liked the way you put an acrostic poem on the slide as well. What are you thinking to do for you next blog post?
Kia ora Aria.
ReplyDeleteAwesome post! did you wear a poppy on anzac day?
Good post for your first one.
Maybe you could fix up some words next time.
- Milla
Hey Aria, Shyla here.
ReplyDeleteThis is a lot of info!😯! Next time you could add adjectives, but other than that, your a walking human of Anzac info! Congrats!😉
Kia ora Aria I like your slide good work on it I like your picture of a soldier and I also like your facts about anzac and I also like your Acrostic poem My favourite part of this slide was the Acrostic poem , picture of the soldier and the facts good work.
ReplyDeleteAloha Aria!
ReplyDeleteNice work! I like these facts and they're very interesting. Next time maybe could you add a few more facts? And do more of an introduction? Because it was a little confusing. Other than that, it was amazing!
From Mikayla.
Kia ora Aria, Courtney here.
ReplyDeleteI would like to start my sentence saying that you have done good on this blog post.
Why did you have to do this? and did you choose to do this???
That's all I have to say, blog you later.
kia ora its Ethan i like that anzac one there is much writing more then i can so are you haveing a good day.
ReplyDeleteAloha Aria,
ReplyDeleteReally great slide, I love how many facts you got down, just one thing you titled it ANZAC day, and ANZAC stands for Australia New Zealand Army Corp but you have a fact that you have not talked about Australia or New Zealand, but it was still a really interesting facts and well done.
Bye and blog you later:)
Talofa lava Aria
ReplyDeleteI like the work you have done about anzac day.Have you thought about doing more blog posts so that people can put even more comments on your blog and you will get more followers? anyway bye.
Kia ora Aria I am Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school I like you animated slide about Anzac my qustion is when did World war happend and end my favourite slide is slide 3 about the Anzac cookies for the solidgers from war. So thats all I need to say so Bye.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Kian here i like your blog post maybe you could say why we celebrate anzac so people can understand a bit more
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Aria, it's Kirsty here. I really like your blog post, especially the bit about why we eat anzac biscuits. For you next blog post you should do something about anzac day like make a poppy. Did you like researching the informations? Bye!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aria you need to post more BLOG posts. but how bid you get all that in one week and one day that very good.
ReplyDeleteHey Aria its your best friend's sister here. you know trisanah's big sister Alizae by the way I love your blog post. by the way can you please do some more information and please can you do some more blog posts please but that blog post was really good nice job Aria Kai Pa.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aria kyle here i am surprised
ReplyDeleteyou know all this did you search all
of this from Google or did you know most of this.
Hey Aria its Aliyah
ReplyDeleteI think maybe in your free time you could post more on your blog.
But I really Iike you Anzac side.
Wow Aria I love how you explained how to celebrate matariki especially when you told us that Their popularity has led to some to suggest that Matariki should replace the Queen’s birthday as a national holiday
ReplyDeleteThis ANZAC slide is really AMAZING and pretty popular because it has 40 comments! I love the bit about poppys! Next time you could add a bit more images!
ReplyDeleteHey I'm doing your 43rd comment Aria!
ReplyDeleteThis is super interesting like you!
I think you can really tell people interesting things.
Your bit about The biscuits it made me hungry and its cool that its for Australia and New Zealand!